Design lab

rounds/r6/s6-photo-art-director/notes.md

Notes: Vienna Family Dental, "Classic practice" (method: photo art director)

Concept in one line: a clear October morning in Vienna (red maples, brick front steps, a family in no hurry), with white panels set on full-bleed photographs, framed by a confident, conventional practice-site structure.

Main decisions

Photos used

Library (generated):

Real (business/assets):

Stock / online:

Removed after review 1: library people-08-1 (café woman). The street behind her looked Parisian; Lynne's real portrait replaced it.

Placeholders

With better assets or more time

The guide: where it helped, where it got in the way

Helped:

Got in the way, or left me guessing:

The review loop

Two rounds: 8/10 overall both times. Round 1 said "another round"; round 2 said "ship" with four polish items, which I made.

It helped, and on different things than my own critique. The point that mattered most was factual: "Book online" in the hero, when booking is really a request form, and five stars above quotes that were never star-rated. I had missed both. After that: the template-y brick offset block plus the off-place café photo, the clip-art article cards, the dead space in the gallery grid, and a stock street captioned as Vienna. My own pass caught layout breakage (the lead dentist rendered smaller than the others, the logo's box, uneven strip heights). The reviewer caught honesty and taste. The two passes complemented each other.