rounds/r6/s11-local-practice/notes.md
Notes: Vienna Family Dental, Art Deco (s11, method local-practice)
Concept in one line: the jewel box on Maple Avenue: the practice as a 1920s hotel lobby where your appointment is a reservation ("Your chair is ready." → "Reserve your chair"), and Vienna appears in its own 1920s beside today.
Main decisions
- Type: Bodoni Moda (a Didone, the 1920s fashion-magazine face; deliberately not a Garamond) for every headline, set large; Jost (Futura's 1927 geometry) for text, with wide-tracked engraved caps for the hero kicker, roles and buttons.
- Color: malachite
#0F3B35and lapis#1B467C(the logo blue, deepened) as the jewel grounds, onyx#121619, a cool marble#EEEDE7(not cream), and brass#D3A84Fas the one metal: hairlines, ornament and the Book button only. No gradients anywhere. - Signature: the stepped ziggurat arch with a fine brass sunburst behind it (96 rays generated as SVG). It frames the hero photo, then only the doctors' portraits. Everything else gets plain brass hairline frames with a stepped corner (services) or a double offset line (panels, form).
- Imagery: the hero is a library family photo in the arch; real cases sit on onyx like a jewelry case; all twelve real portraits appear (Paino in his own section, the two other dentists in arches, nine staff in arched ovals); the paneling texture duotoned into lapis grounds "Nerves are welcome"; the town section is a black-and-white photo essay: Library of Congress photos of Vienna in the 1920s beside the Freeman Store and the W&OD depot today, all duotoned onyx/marble so then and now match.
- Layout: header and hero merged on malachite; then marble services tiles → onyx cases → marble Paino → lapis paneling sedation → malachite team → photo reviews → marble paying → lapis Vienna → malachite booking → onyx footer. Book or call appears in the hero, cases, sedation, paying, Vienna (directions) and booking, plus the sticky header.
- Voice: hotel-lobby wit kept to the headlines ("Your chair is ready.", "At your service", "Look closely", "He remembers the other kind", "Nerves are welcome", "Paying, plainly", "Reserve your chair"); the practice's slogan and the 7:30 opening sit in copy below, never as headlines.
Images used
Library: hero-01-2 (hero), people-10-1, people-01-1, people-02-1 (service tiles), place-02-1 (reviews background, darkened), detail-05-1 (paying), texture-05-1 (duotone lapis, sedation ground), svg/illustration-01, -04 (service tiles, recolored brass on lapis/malachite), svg/illustration-06 (sedation, brass). Considered and dropped: texture-04-1 terrazzo (reviewer: read as 1980s, not 1920s); people-04-1 as the reviews ground (a stock couple under "Rated 4.9 by 292 patients" implied they were patients).
Business assets: all 12 team portraits, all 5 cases (veneers-face-after also as the cosmetic tile), both logos.
Online (Wikimedia Commons, via the Commons API):
- "July 4th celebration, Vienna, Va." 1921, National Photo Company, Library of Congress LCCN2016845532, public domain.
- "P.O., Vienna, Va." 1910-35, National Photo Company, Library of Congress LCCN2016824775, public domain.
- "Freeman House Store and Museum, Vienna, Virginia", Ron Dicker, CC BY-SA 4.0.
- "Vienna Washington & Old Dominion Depot", Wikimedia Commons, CC BY-SA 4.0 (2018).
Downloaded but unused: Kenyon and Sanderson groups (1920s Vienna families; tempting, but people on a dentist's page read as patients), Meadowlark Botanical Gardens (CC BY 2.0; colour didn't fit the essay).
Placeholders
[CONFIRM: parking](Vienna section).[CONFIRM: within one business day]: how fast the desk calls back after a request.- Fees: none shown (no published prices); owner question: typical fee for a new-patient exam and cleaning.
- Roles for Nancy, Jordan, Kathia and Jenefer (shown with names only).
- The form has no back end; it posts to
#book.
With better assets or more time
- A real photograph of the office, the front door on Maple Avenue, or the team at work would replace the library hero; the arch is built for a real portrait of the practice.
- The team shot again in one session against a deep green backdrop would make the portrait wall sing.
- Self-host and subset the fonts; AVIF/srcset for the hero.
- A "first visit" module for children and a short FAQ would earn their place on a longer page.
The guide: where it helped, where it got in the way
- Helped: "What makes it local" with real
--placephotos pushed me to the Commons category, and the 1920s Library of Congress photos turned out to be where the direction and the place meet. The plan-review list of earlier looks caught my first idea for services (a Deco "bill of fare" with dotted leaders: the ruled list in costume). The section table with a background column kept the rhythm honest. - Got in the way / guessing: the guide asks for price information on every page, but facts.md says no prices are published; the reviewer said delete the placeholder. A rule for "no published prices" would help. "At most two sections on a plain light background" vs "every section has a visual" is fine, but the guide doesn't say what counts as a texture: I reached for terrazzo to dodge the rule and it looked wrong. The build-standard (Worker, headers, sitemap) is mostly noise in this round.
tools/stock.ts --placewasn't used: the memory of earlier rounds said it comes back thin; the Commons API with curl and 5-second pauses worked first time.
The review loop
Two rounds; the reviewer said ship after round 2 (scores 7 → 8 overall, phone 6 → 8), so no third. It helped, mostly with things I hadn't looked at closely enough: the phone mosaic where captions sat under the next photos (broken, invisible in the desktop view), the makeover case cropped to the forehead so the result didn't show, and Dr. Paino's single portrait used twice. Those three mattered most. Its taste calls were good too: terrazzo read as 1980s, and the stock couple behind the rating headline implied patients. One suggestion didn't transfer literally (its mask percentages would have hidden the sunburst), so I adjusted the values.