Design lab

rounds/r4/s7-blueprint-remix/notes.md

Notes: s7-blueprint-remix, round 4 (direction: Main Street shop)

Concept in one line: the practice as a well-loved shop on Maple Avenue (painted sign board, striped awning, an "Open" sign in the window, the hours on the door), rebuilt on the layout system of Fishs Eddy's homepage.

Process (the guide's method)

Main decisions

Images used

Library (library/img/): hero-02-1 (hero: family on brick steps), people-03-1 (checkups tile), detail-04-1 (kids tile), people-06-1 (Scared of the dentist), people-07-1 (Before school, before work), hero-01-2 (Kids, full-bleed), texture-07-1 (the oak shelves). Library images were used as they are: they already match each other and the warm brick palette. (The recolorable aligner SVG was tried as the Invisalign tile and taken out in review: an icon in a row of photos read as a placeholder.)

Real practice assets: logo.jpg, logo-white.png; all 12 team portraits; cases veneers, bridge, chipped and makeover-face (before and after) on the shelves; veneers-face-after (the Invisalign tile: her case started with Invisalign) and a crop of chipped-after (the Veneers & bonding tile).

Stock, all Wikimedia Commons, given a light warm wash (tint.ts wash #F2C9A0 0.2) so they sit with the library:

The credits are also in the page footer. The Vienna prints are captioned "Our neighbors", never as the office.

Placeholders

With better assets or more time

Where the guide helped, and where it got in the way

Helped:

Got in the way, or left me guessing:

The review loop: yes, it helped. Three rounds: 8 → 8 → 8 (ship), with every sub-score up a point or held. The points that mattered most: 1. Two factual errors I'd missed: Jason A. credited to "Google review" (the quotes come from the practice's site), and quoted twice. 2. Casting: three near-identical brunettes in cream knits read as one generated model. Replacing two tiles with the practice's real results made the services row stronger and more honest. 3. Rhythm: five 50/50 splits in a row, and "7:30" said six times. The full-bleed Kids section and the mirrored Insurance section fixed it. Dropping the marquee strip also removed a stat-strip tell. 4. The collage running off the screen, and phone-only breakages (the Kids panel over a bare band). I wouldn't have caught those as quickly myself.